I just played a quick game of this and I think you could help with a project we are working on at the VALIDATE Network. This is for PAID work for what I suspect will be a reskin of School Rush. Have a look at our project- https://www.validate-network.org/bcg-adventures-designers
I think we could use School Rush as a basis for Little Lille adventure.
I am so sorry for the very late response. It's been a long time since I logged into Itch.io. Then again, I have looked through your website, and understood that you could use School Rush as a basis for Albert and Camille’s Little Lille Adventure. I am honored that you have chosen School Rush to be a template for one of your your upcoming games.
If you wish to use School Rush as basis for Little Lille Adventure, feel free to do so. However, I hope to be given a mention for School Rush, but the biggest acknowledgement should go to Kadokawa Corporation and Yoji Ojima because they provided the RPG Maker MV software that I used to make the game.
All in all the game was quick played obviously because of the 10 mins rules but still good job for finishing a short game. You have the potential to improve and be a much better designer and developer. Just continue on learning and enjoying what you love. You have the sense of good design, I can tell. Practice, learning more, improving more.
Suggestions:
School Rush...you can add school elements for monsters like terror teachers or living calculator hahaha, just suggestions though. For puzzles, school subjects, number puzzles.
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I just played a quick game of this and I think you could help with a project we are working on at the VALIDATE Network. This is for PAID work for what I suspect will be a reskin of School Rush. Have a look at our project- https://www.validate-network.org/bcg-adventures-designers
I think we could use School Rush as a basis for Little Lille adventure.
If you are interested, let me know - https://www.validate-network.org/bcg-adventures-designers
Blakeley Nixon
blakeley.nixon@ndm.ox.ac.uk
Hi there!
I am so sorry for the very late response. It's been a long time since I logged into Itch.io. Then again, I have looked through your website, and understood that you could use School Rush as a basis for Albert and Camille’s Little Lille Adventure.
I am honored that you have chosen School Rush to be a template for one of your your upcoming games.
If you wish to use School Rush as basis for Little Lille Adventure, feel free to do so. However, I hope to be given a mention for School Rush, but the biggest acknowledgement should go to Kadokawa Corporation and Yoji Ojima because they provided the RPG Maker MV software that I used to make the game.
Thank you.
School Rush by Nasran
Review by CM
Intro:
Hey Nasran, you're so fast. You were the first maker to finish our 10 minutes game challenge. It was a quick play but still good job! Congratulations.
Here's my quick review about your game. Read it with a grain of salt. Oh by the way thanks for that mention in your ending credits. :)
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Review:
(1) I like that you compiled it to .exe than having a lot of folders. I highly recommend makers to do the same. Good job.
(2) At the Title Screen, when I went to Options and wanted to return to the Title, there's an error message. Error: (see image attached)
Solution: I created a folder 'www' and inside that folder I created another one 'save'. The error's gone after.
(3) Try to put a custom logo to your game(s). Even if it's just a short game, custom logo will add to the game's content.
(4) The Title screen is simple and the music fits the theme. Nothing more to say. You can still improve it in your future projects.
(5) I like the font, very readable and big, fits the lively game.
(6) The mapping is too boxy but carry on. You can improve it in your future projects.
(7) Some shadows felt weird haha but carry on.
(8) The battle system is the default one, I like the different colors of monsters. Nothing more to say. You can improve it in your future projects.
(9) I like the battle BGM, upbeat sound.
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Summary:
All in all the game was quick played obviously because of the 10 mins rules but still good job for finishing a short game. You have the potential to improve and be a much better designer and developer. Just continue on learning and enjoying what you love. You have the sense of good design, I can tell. Practice, learning more, improving more.
Suggestions:
School Rush...you can add school elements for monsters like terror teachers or living calculator hahaha, just suggestions though. For puzzles, school subjects, number puzzles.
End Message:
Thanks Nasran for joining our RPG Biz 10 Minutes Challenge. I hope you enjoyed and learned something from this challenge. Cheers. :)
You have completed the challenge. Congratulations!
~ cm
Congrats for completing the 10 minutes challenge Nasran. Good Job! cm
Cool ^^ I like the dialogues and the death screams xD
henryetha Thanks xD the screams are random stuff from the RPG Maker package xD